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7．針對目前高中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以"Effective Ways to Release the Stress"為題于上周調(diào)查采訪了五個學(xué)校的500名高中學(xué)生．請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果的圖表寫一份報告，并再談?wù)勛约夯蛏磉呁瑢W(xué)釋放壓力的有效方法．（字?jǐn)?shù)150字左右）
參考詞：心理咨詢室the psychological consulting office


Effective Ways to Release the Stress
Nowadays more and more seniorschoolstudents are getting stressed in their studies．…
                               

Answer 1

分析 篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息以"Effective Ways to Release the Stress"為題，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖畫是文章的總體框架，要在圖畫的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感；要用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過渡自然．寫出內(nèi)涵意思，本文最大的特點(diǎn)就是想象力十分豐富，文章要有血有肉，無論是長短句的搭配，還是從句的使用，都要做到恰當(dāng)，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In order to以便，為了；as follows如下；for instance比如；Meanwhile同時；In this way以這種方式；In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）

解答 Effective Ways to Release the Stress
    Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）Altogether 500 students were interviewed，and some if interesting results were as follows：About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports．They play football，for instance．Meanwhile，another forty-five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music．Interestingly，the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office．
    When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）Then I'll have a good sleep．In this way，I'll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．