Question

16．George claims that he read 53books in 2012．My friend and I found this fairly unbelievable，considering he seems to have a pretty full schedule．
Anyway，it appears that I am on track to read 72new books this year．But I've come to realize that this number can easily be skewed（扭曲）．For instance，currently I am reading Rising Tide：The Story of the Mississippi Flood of 1927．This book is over 700pages．It's going to take me the month of May （along with Harry Potter rereads； I can't read nonfiction while going to sleep）．So my May average will be way off．However，when I read chick-lits （雞仔文學(xué)，都市女性文學(xué)），I can get those done in a day．I guess it all depends on what I choose to read．
In reality，reading is beneficial because it encourages us to slow down our thinking，and also to fully interpret someone else's experience．Reading keeps the mind sharp and expands a person's vocabulary．We read to educate ourselves．We read to help ourselves．We read to escape our own lives and live in that of another for a little while．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；
2．以約120個詞就"讀書"這個話題談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）對比上文，你每年閱讀多少書籍；
（2）舉例說明你從閱讀中獲得的好處；
（3）呼吁人們多讀書．
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇讀寫任務(wù)作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，概括短文內(nèi)容，并以"讀書"為主題，闡述有你的想法．
寫作時，應(yīng)以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作要點(diǎn)：1．概括所給短文內(nèi)容；2．你每年閱讀的書籍量．3．讀書的益處；4．呼吁人們多讀書．
重點(diǎn)短語：
compare with（與…比較）the number of（…的數(shù)量） play an important role in （起著重要作用） no matter what （無論怎樣） be able to（能，會做…）
高分句型：
1．Reading really brings the readers a lot of benefits such as broadening one's mind．該句靈活運(yùn)用benefit，broaden等詞匯．
2． Reading opens the world and the human experience to everyone，no matter what his or her social status is．該句運(yùn)用no matter what，social status等短語．
3．For example，I once read a book called Man，Woman and Child，which enabled me to understand the love in a family．該句為非限制性定語從句．

解答 Compared with the books his friend read in a year，the number of those ones the author read seems a little bit larger．Reading really brings the readers a lot of benefits such as broadening one's mind．（高分句型1）（概括短文內(nèi)容）
Reading books plays an important role in a person's lifelong development．Nowadays though there exist other medias through which we can learn a lot，there is no denying that we should never give up reading books．Reading opens the world and the human experience to everyone，no matter what his or her social status is．（高分句型2）Books make us dream and wonder．They seize our imaginations and let us escape our daily life for a moment．Since I became a senior student，I have read a great number of books，around 40 books a year．For example，I once read a book called Man，Woman and Child，which enabled me to understand the love in a family．（高分句型3）Besides，I really built up a large vocabulary by reading many English books．（自己讀書情況及從中得到的益處）
There are books on every subject written for almost every level of understanding．Therefore，we are able to make our own choices．I hope everyone can read a certain number of books every year．（發(fā)出呼吁）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所給要點(diǎn)，寫作時注意正確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞，句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．