20.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉.
修改:在錯的下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
I wish I can be an excellent cook when I grow up because I enjoy cooking but I want to bring happiness to people who taste my food.
I still remember clearly that happened when I cooked for the first time.I almost had my finger cutting when I cut onions and made a mess of the kitchen.Worse still,the dish I cooked tasted so terribly that I even thought about quitting.Thanks for my mother's encouragement and patient guidance,I continued practicing cook at home whenever I had time.It was then my cooking skills improved gradually.
I'll try my best to learn and improve my cooking skills in order that to make your dream a reality.And I believe I can make it!