Question

15．假定你是李華，你班同學進行了一場關(guān)于"公交車上是否該讓座？"主題的大討論．一些人認為不應該讓座；另一些人認為這是一種好行為．請你用英語給某英語報社寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹討論情況，并談談自己的做法和看法．
Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seats on bus or not．
Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired
他們認為的原因是，所有乘客都已經(jīng)有了自己的座位上的平等權(quán)利，尤其是當他們累了．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
在我看來，我認為在公共汽車上提供的座位，雖然一個小小的行動，但是象征著善良和我們的文明水平．

解答 Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seat on bus or not．Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired（高分句型一）．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization（高分句型二）．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．