Question

14．假如你是李華，一名高中生．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，呼吁同學(xué)們調(diào)節(jié)好自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活．發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．許多同學(xué)為了學(xué)習(xí)，晚上經(jīng)常熬夜，白天課堂上容易犯困
2．有的同學(xué)沒有養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習(xí)慣
3．針對以上現(xiàn)狀，提出建議
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear everyone，
I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．                                 
That's all．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知以第一人稱的口吻來進行敘述，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容分成兩部分：一 敘述學(xué)生的問題；二 提出改正的建議．
高分句型：
1．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which （引導(dǎo)定語從句，which代指主句）will surely do harm to their health
一些同學(xué)形成了不好的飲食習(xí)慣，這肯定會對他們的健康有害．
2．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（only引導(dǎo)狀語位于句首，主句用倒裝）
只有用這種方法，我們才能保持健康，好好學(xué)習(xí)．

解答 Dear everyone，
     I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．Recently I have found that many classmates study late into the night．As a result，they often cannot help falling asleep in class during the day．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which will surely do harm to their health（高分句型一）（學(xué)生的問題）．
      As is known to all，it's extremely important for us students to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must make wise use of our time，and develop a good eating habit．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（高分句型二）．I hope you will agree with me（改正的建議）．
      That's all．Thank you for listening!

點評 倒裝句式是高中生應(yīng)該掌握的一種句式，也是作文的亮點，除了only的倒裝，否定詞位于句首時，也需要用倒裝，例如：
Never have I been there before．