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3．假定你是李華，美國交換生Peter曾在你校留學(xué)，你校校長想邀請他父親Smith作為嘉賓，參加新學(xué)期開學(xué)典禮，請你代他寫一封邀請信，說明有關(guān)事項（活動內(nèi)容、時間、地點、意義等），通過電子郵件發(fā)給他．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，美國交換生Peter曾在你校留學(xué)，你校校長想邀請他父親Smith作為嘉賓，參加新學(xué)期開學(xué)典禮，請你代他寫一封邀請信，通過電子郵件發(fā)給他．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：說明有關(guān)事項（活動內(nèi)容、時間、地點、意義等）    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：on behalf of 代表；the opening ceremony of 開幕式；live a happy life過一個幸福的生活；in advance提前
 I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）
I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 am．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
      Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．