4.今年九月,北大考試研究院院長(zhǎng)秦春華發(fā)文稱,四大名著不適合孩子閱讀.可能不少人不太認(rèn)同他的觀點(diǎn),但只限于私下議論.鄭州外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高三學(xué)生高澤林卻站出來(lái)公開(kāi)叫板秦春華,他認(rèn)為四大名著孩子可以讀,相較于四大名著中的負(fù)面內(nèi)容,現(xiàn)實(shí)中的低俗更甚.他的文章條理清晰,有理有據(jù),引來(lái)不少網(wǎng)友點(diǎn)贊.
高中生挑戰(zhàn)北大教授,你真覺(jué)得好嗎?請(qǐng)以李華的名義給高澤林同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)自己的看法.(提示詞:四大名著:four great classical novels)
要點(diǎn):1.寫(xiě)信目的;
2.與他交流你對(duì)四大名著的看法;
3.希望收到回信.
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Zelin Gao,
I am a high school student of the same age with you.Recently,your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a hot topic on the Internet.(高分句型一)I am writing to share some ideas with you.
In my opinion,four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China.(高分句型二)As a result,we can learn the meaning of love,loyalty and wisdom.However,only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future.(高分句型三)I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息針對(duì)今年九月,北大考試研究院院長(zhǎng)秦春華發(fā)文稱,四大名著不適合孩子閱讀.可能不少人不太認(rèn)同他的觀點(diǎn),但只限于私下議論.鄭州外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高三學(xué)生高澤林卻站出來(lái)公開(kāi)叫板秦春華,他認(rèn)為四大名著孩子可以讀,相較于四大名著中的負(fù)面內(nèi)容,現(xiàn)實(shí)中的低俗更甚.他的文章條理清晰,有理有據(jù),引來(lái)不少網(wǎng)友點(diǎn)贊,以李華的名義給高澤林同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)自己的看法:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):寫(xiě)信目的;與他交流你對(duì)四大名著的看法;希望收到回信. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文內(nèi)容齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),層次分明,布局合理,語(yǔ)言精練,同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子.倒裝句的使用非常漂亮:only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future.連接詞的使用也是一大亮點(diǎn):In my opinion,As a result,However.

解答 Dear Zelin Gao,
      I am a high school student of the same age with you.Recently,your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a hot topic on the Internet.(高分句型一)I am writing to share some ideas with you.
      In my opinion,four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China.(高分句型二)As a result,we can learn the meaning of love,loyalty and wisdom.However,only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future.(高分句型三)I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects.
       Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours truly,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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D.introduce the story collection The Refugees
33.Which of the following about The Refugees is True?D
A.It tells the news in a literary form.
B.It is full of surprising twists and plots.
C.The author experiences the stories himself.
D.Its characters narrate their own stories.
34.We can infer from Paragraph 5 thatB.
A.relatives hate their loved ones for being left behind
B.separation from loved ones tends to make them distant
C.people become refugees due to their double character
D.smiling is a good way to keep loved ones together
35.Which of the following is the theme of The Refugees?B
A.Despair,suffering,and regret.
B.Anger,humour and hope.
C.Sympathy,regret,and reconciliation.
D.Dream,hope,and expectation.

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