【題目】假定你是李華。你之前在網(wǎng)上為你校交換生Jack預(yù)定了下周六晚上7：30的川劇演出， 現(xiàn)該演出被宣布取消，請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 告知演出取消；

2. 后續(xù)事項(xiàng)處理；

3. 其它活動(dòng)建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】One Possible Version:

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a piece of pitiful news. But the thing is such. Later the opera will give the money back and then I will return it to you. Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. For example, I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

Wish you an enjoyable experience in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達(dá)告知朋友預(yù)定的川劇演出被取消，并告知后續(xù)處理和活動(dòng)建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.告知川劇演出被取消

2.告知后續(xù)處理

3.提出活動(dòng)建議

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be sorry to tell; look forward to; a pitiful news; give the money back; some other interesting and meaningful activities; the traditional Sichuan hotpot; watch pandas

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.

2. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a pitiful news.

3. Later the opera will give the money back.

4. You still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in.

5. I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods.

6. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改

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