分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息以"感恩"為主題的英語短文比賽.請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇短文,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):感恩對象:如父母、老師;感恩理由:如父母養(yǎng)育之恩、老師培養(yǎng)之恩…;感恩方式:…2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看;not only…but also…不僅…而且;make every effort to不遺余力地去做;devote…to 致力于;live up to 達(dá)到,符合;In short總之
In my opinion,our gratitude should first go to our parents because they not only provide us with food and clothing but also care for us in many ways.(高分句型一)
Second,we should thank the teachers who are making every effort to give us wisdom and knowledge and help us become useful persons.(高分句型二)
Therefore,we should devote ourselves to studying so that we can live up to their expectations.(高分句型三)
解答 Always Be Grateful
As is known to all,it is one of the Chinese traditional virtues to be grateful to whoever has been kind and helpful to us.
In my opinion,our gratitude should first go to our parents because they not only provide us with food and clothing but also care for us in many ways.(高分句型一)They are always willing to do whatever they can to ensure our happiness.Second,we should thank the teachers who are making every effort to give us wisdom and knowledge and help us become useful persons.(高分句型二)
As the saying goes,actions speak louder than words.Therefore,we should devote ourselves to studying so that we can live up to their expectations.(高分句型三)It's also important to express our gratitude whenever we get help from them.
In short,we should strengthen our sense of gratitude and take action to repay their love and kindness.
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點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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