Question

4．請你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
Failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．
注意：
①無須寫標題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
What impressed me most is that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．
給我印象最深的是，失敗是因為努力而不是缺乏能力缺乏．
高分句型二：
Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life．
只有當我們有我們可以在我們的生活中取得成功的一個很好的知識．

解答 Years of school life has taught me a lot of things．What impressed me most is that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability（高分句型一）．
When it comes to that，memories flood into my mind．I can still well remember it was a time when I was in senior 1．Every one of my class said I was smart and clever，and I fancied myself too．But to my great disappointment，I failed in a very important test．Seeing through my puzzle，my head teacher said to me，"failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．"It was his words that woke me up．So I spared no efforts to study and made great progress in the end．
From my own experience，I can draw a conclusion that we fail because we don't try our best rather than we are not intelligent．Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life（高分句型二）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．