Question

19．目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教．對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象，存在以下兩種不同觀點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以Are Training Classes Necessary？為題，寫一篇150詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)．

有些人認(rèn)為有必要	另一些人認(rèn)為沒有必要
1．有老師輔導(dǎo)比自己學(xué)好， 2．彌補(bǔ)上課錯(cuò)過或沒聽懂的東西 3．更多機(jī)會(huì)和時(shí)間老師交流	1．養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣，導(dǎo)致有的學(xué)生課堂上不認(rèn)真聽講 2．學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息和娛樂 3．意味著花費(fèi)很多錢
個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：…

注意：1．詞數(shù)：150字左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：家庭教師：tutor  依賴：dependence  娛樂：recreation
Are Training Classes Necessary？
Nowadays more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表+話題類作文，內(nèi)容貼近考生生活，考生有話可寫，具有時(shí)代性和可寫性，要求考生就所給中文提示，表達(dá)出對(duì)待周末上培訓(xùn)班或者請(qǐng)家教的不同觀點(diǎn)，短文標(biāo)題、開頭及寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫一篇英文短文．由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)潔，所以需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展．題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可．要反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)．另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯．準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．注意詞數(shù)100 詞左右，不要寫得太多，更不能太少．盡量避免使用生僻詞匯，在正確使用簡(jiǎn)單句的同時(shí)，要努力使用復(fù)合句，提升作文檔次．
亮點(diǎn)部分
  Secondly，students can make up for what they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays．（高分句型）
For one thing，students can easily develop the habit of dependence，causing some students not to listen att entively in their regular classes．（高分句型）
What's worse，attending training classes means costing them much money．（高分句型）

解答 Are Training Classes Necessary？
    Nowadays more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends．
    Some of the students think it necessary to do so．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher's help than by themselves．Secondly，students can make up for what they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays．（高分句型）Besides，they can have more chances and time to communicate with teachers．
    However，others don't think so．For one thing，students can easily develop the habit of dependence，causing some students not to listen att entively in their regular classes．（高分句型）For another，students need time for rest and recreation at weekends．What's worse，attending training classes means costing them much money．
（高分句型）   
     In my opinion，whether a training class or a tutor is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a subject，maybe it's necessary for you．But be sure to choose a suitable class or teacher，otherwise，it would be a waste of time and money．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．