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19．高一學生李華學習英語遇上了困難，寫信向他的老師Mary尋求學好英語的學習方法；假如你是Mary，請給李華寫一封回信，要求包含以下內容：
1．要有自信心；2．多背誦；3．大量閱讀；4．多練習．
要求：1．根據(jù)要點提示可適當發(fā)揮；2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．詞數(shù)100字左右．
Dear Li Hua，
I have received your letter and learned about your problem．Indeed，many students find it a great challenge to get used to senior English learning．So don't be nervous，I will give you some tips，which I hope will be of great help to you．（高分句型一）
To begin with，don't lose heart．Confidence plays an important role in English learning．（要有自信心）Besides，try to learn something useful by heart as possibly as you can，such as some set phrases，sentence structures，and some beautiful passages where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions．（高分句型二）（多背誦）And in your free time，you'd better read much，which will contribute to building up your vocabulary and help to better your reading and writing．（高分句型三）（大量閱讀）What's more，practice is an effective way．As we all know，practice makes perfect．You can have a try without delay．Practise your listening，speaking，reading and writing as often as possible．（多練習）
I hope you can follow these suggestions and make progress．
Yours，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給李華寫一封回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：要有自信心；多背誦；大量閱讀；多練習． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點． 
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：get used to 適應；be of great help 非常有幫助；To begin with首先；lose heart灰心喪氣；Besides另外；What's more而且；without delay毫不耽擱；as…as possible盡可能…；make progress取得進步
So don't be nervous，I will give you some tips，which I hope will be of great help to you．（高分句型一） 
Besides，try to learn something useful by heart as possibly as you can，such as some set phrases，sentence structures，and some beautiful passages where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions．（高分句型二）
And in your free time，you'd better read much，which will contribute to building up your vocabulary and help to better your reading and writing．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
       I have received your letter and learned about your problem．Indeed，many students find it a great challenge to get used to senior English learning．So don't be nervous，I will give you some tips，which I hope will be of great help to you．（高分句型一） 
       To begin with，don't lose heart．Confidence plays an important role in English learning．（要有自信心）Besides，try to learn something useful by heart as possibly as you can，such as some set phrases，sentence structures，and some beautiful passages where you can enjoy many beautiful sentences and learn some useful expressions．（高分句型二）（多背誦）And in your free time，you'd better read much，which will contribute to building up your vocabulary and help to better your reading and writing．（高分句型三）（大量閱讀）What's more，practice is an effective way．As we all know，practice makes perfect．You can have a try without delay．Practise your listening，speaking，reading and writing as often as possible．（多練習） 
       I hope you can follow these suggestions and make progress． 
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Mary

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．