16．1．該刊的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：語(yǔ)言完美，內(nèi)容新鮮，圖文并茂；
2．你的建議：刊登名人故事，指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：刊登 carry
Dear Sir or Madam，
Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of English Readers!                                
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

分析 本文是提綱類寫作，要點(diǎn)已給出．寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，高級(jí)詞匯、高級(jí)句式用在句中．I like the magazine because of the following reasons．復(fù)合介詞because of用在句中，恰到好處；the language in the magazine is perfect，which is good for English learners．非限制性定語(yǔ)從句巧妙運(yùn)用；the magazine keeps up with times，so we can learn about what have happened around the world．so引導(dǎo)的并列句和what引導(dǎo)的介詞的賓語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；it contains beautiful and vivid pictures，which makes reading it more interesting．再次使用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；Would you please carry some inspiring stories about famous people in order to encourage readers？目的狀語(yǔ)體現(xiàn)在句中；It would also be greatly appreciated if…，固定句式堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，Congratulations，F(xiàn)irst，F(xiàn)inally，However，的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of English Readers!I'm a devoted reader of your magazine．I'm writing to express my opinions on your magazine．
        I like the magazine because of the following reasons．First，the language in the magazine is perfect，which is good for English learners．（高分句型一） Second，the magazine keeps up with times，so we can learn about what have happened around the world．Finally，it contains beautiful and vivid pictures，which makes reading it more interesting．（高分句型二）
       However，I still have some suggestions to make．Would you please carry some inspiring stories about famous people in order to encourage readers？It would also be greatly appreciated if you regularly offered some advice on English learning．（高分句型三）
       I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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