Question

假定你是西安某一中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上,你看到如下的一個(gè)帖子:

??? With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

請(qǐng)你回帖，要點(diǎn)如下： 

1. 列出某些學(xué)生心理焦慮的現(xiàn)象；????? 2. 提出應(yīng)該采取的對(duì)策（如積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法）。

注意：1. 文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

    ? 2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

?? I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me.?????????

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me. Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

???? As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求列出心理焦慮的各種現(xiàn)象，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)和第三人稱。在提出應(yīng)該采取對(duì)策的時(shí)候，又屬于議論文的格式。

本文要點(diǎn)：1.列舉學(xué)生心理焦慮的現(xiàn)象：部分學(xué)生擔(dān)憂考試成績；一些學(xué)生無法入睡；有些失去信心；有些學(xué)生與他人無法相處；2.解決的對(duì)策：向老師求助；對(duì)于別人交流；對(duì)待生活有積極的態(tài)度；

在寫作的時(shí)候要靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文的亮點(diǎn)是連接詞的使用，如：as a matter of fact, first of all, Second和last but not least這些連詞讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。另外句中使用了一些高級(jí)詞匯：get along well with…, develop attitudes towards…等等。

考點(diǎn)：考察社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類作文