Question

3．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That's right-sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy．
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you？
*考拉即樹袋熊
[寫作內容]
1．以約30個詞概括這段短文的內容；
2．然后以約120個詞就"該不該禁止游客和動物拍照"進行議論，內容包括：
（1）人們在參觀動物園時為什么喜歡和動物拍照；
（2）假如你處在那些動物的處境，你會有什么反應；
（3）你認為是否應該禁止游客和動物拍照．
[寫作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，篇章連貫．
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．
The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．
If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．No doubt we do and so do the animals．
I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要講述了考拉因總是被游客拍照打擾導致半睡半醒而不開心，引出了該不該禁止游客和動物拍照的作文話題．考生應按照要求寫作，先概括內容，再根據(jù)三個要點內容展開自己的觀點．在寫作過程中所運用的時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
 sort of 有點，有幾分，no doubt，無疑，
高分句子：
1．The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．本句含有重要句型The reasons why…，…的原因是．
2．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．本句前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，豐富句子內容．

解答 The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．（概括短文內容）
    The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．（高分句型）Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．（描述為何人類喜歡和動物拍照）
    If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．（高分句型）No doubt we do and so do the animals．（假設我是動物的反應）
    I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．（總結，認為不應該拍照）

點評 要想使自己的書面表達得高分，首先要做到揚長避短．"揚長"就是發(fā)揮自身的優(yōu)勢，使用熟練掌握的句型，"避短"就是避開自己的弱點，盡量做到不犯錯誤或少犯錯誤，這是讀寫任務得分的關鍵所在．