Question

20．你校�？瘜⒁�征集有關(guān)愛護(hù)學(xué)校校園環(huán)境的英文稿件，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，根據(jù)以下提示向其投稿．
1．愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的必要性．
2．你校學(xué)生在愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境方面存在的問題．（兩點(diǎn)）
3．就愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境提出建議．（兩點(diǎn)）
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，文章開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
As we all know，it is necessary for all of us students to protect our campus environment．           ．

Answer 1

分析 這是提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知是讓寫有關(guān)愛護(hù)學(xué)校校園環(huán)境的英文稿件，所以用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．文章分成三部分：一愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的必要性；二學(xué)生在愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境方面存在的問題；三愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的建議．
高分句型：
1．Some of them throw rubbish here and there，making our campus dirty and untidy（結(jié)果狀語，是亂丟垃圾的必然結(jié)果）他們中的一些人四處亂丟垃圾，使得我們的校園又臟又亂．
2．Above all，we can call on all the schoolmates to form the good habit of not throwing rubbish everywhere but putting different rubbish into different dustbins（not..but..組成并列結(jié)構(gòu)，表示"不是…而是"）
最重要的是，我們要號(hào)召同學(xué)們養(yǎng)成不亂丟垃圾，而是給垃圾分類的好習(xí)慣．

解答 As we all know，it is necessary for all of us students to protect our campus environment． The campus is where we live and study，so we have the responsibility to protect our campus environment（愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的必要性）．
However，there exist some problems about the campus environment protection among some schoolmates．Some of them throw rubbish here and there，making our campus dirty and untidy（高分句型一）．What's worse，some students pick the flowers，even break the young trees（學(xué)生在愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境方面存在的問題）．
Concerning how to protect our campus environment，I have some suggestions as follows：Above all，we can call on all the schoolmates to form the good habit of not throwing rubbish everywhere but putting different rubbish into different dustbins（高分句型二）．Also，some proper measures should be taken to fight against the behavior of destroying our campus environment（愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的建議 ）．（113words）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 連詞的運(yùn)用會(huì)使文章的條理更清楚，一般在介紹某種做法的時(shí)候需要利用，例如本文中的What's worse，Above all，Also，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)寫作時(shí)要養(yǎng)成利用它們的習(xí)慣．