第四節(jié) 書面表達(dá)

如今，網(wǎng)上購物越來越流行了。請就網(wǎng)上購物的利弊加以評論，并說明自己的看法和做法。

要求：1、句子連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。 2、詞數(shù)在100左右。

  Internet shopping is becoming more and more popular among people.

It is convenient for customers to go shopping on line. They can stay at home looking for the items they need or like through the Internet, which supplies a variety of products.

However, you can’t actually see the products and check their quality, and it is not safe enough to pay for goods using the credit cards.

In my opinion, we can shop in this modern way—through the Internet, but we’d better check and make sure that the quality of the goods is excellent before we order them. Sometimes I would rather go to the shops to buy something if I’m free, then I may meet and talk with my friends as well.

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