Question

假如你是李明，現(xiàn)在上高一，覺(jué)得自己已長(zhǎng)大了，可是父母還把你像小孩一樣對(duì)待，現(xiàn)在你把你的感受以書(shū)信形式同爸爸媽媽談?wù)劇?br />提示：
1．父母過(guò)度擔(dān)心你的安全，不讓你獨(dú)自出行；
2．過(guò)分的關(guān)心會(huì)使孩子喪失獨(dú)立生活能力，失去成長(zhǎng)的樂(lè)趣；
3．你過(guò)分依賴父母會(huì)被同學(xué)看不起。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I am writing to you to tell how I have been feeling,
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Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Liming

Answer 1

Dear Mum and Dad,
I am writing to you to tell how I have been feeling。Since I was a kid, you have always being worried about me every time I am out. As a result, I have lost a lot of chances to experience the things I should do. In your wiew, I have been a child that can’t grow into an adult.What’s more, Being overly concerned about can’t make me live an independent life ,making me lose interest in growing up. Last but not the least, I’ll be looked down upon by others due to your over protection.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Liming

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