Question

4．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
You may talk a lot in life，but you must learn to listen．
注意：
①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點句型一：I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party．我還記得有一次，我最好的朋友向我保證她會來參加我的生日聚會．本句是一個復(fù)合句，其中that once my best friend made a promise 是賓語從句做remember的賓語；that she would come to my birthday party是一個同位語從句，做promise的同位語．
亮點句型二：It was not until then that I realized the importance of listening．直到那時我才意識到傾聽的重要性．本句是一個強調(diào)句，被強調(diào)部分是時間not untill then，

解答 Have you ever noticed that we have only one mouth but two ears？Some people say that is because the God hopes that we can learn to listen to others more．I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party．（亮點句型一）To my great disappointment，she didn't show up．She later tried to explain what had happened to her，but I refused to listen．There came some misunderstanding between her and me．I thought she didn't value our friendship at all and just found excuse for her absence．But later，another friend told me that on her way to my party，she met an old man who lost the way home．She had great difficulty in helping the old man getting back home，so she missed my party．Now I felt it a pity that I hadn't listened to her with my heart．It was not until then that I realized the importance of listening．（亮點句型二）
      My experience tells me that it is important to learn to listen．It is listening that can remove much misunderstanding．

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．