Question

12．假如你是高二學生小王，在復習準備迎接期末考中遇到煩惱時，你的同學給過你很多鼓勵和幫助，你深有感觸．
現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文．要求如下：
1．你的煩惱
2．同學如何鼓勵和幫助到你
3．你的感觸
With the final-exam drawing near，___________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們以高二學生小王的身份，就在復習準備迎接期末考中遇到煩惱，同學給過你很多鼓勵和幫助此事寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，內容要點包括：你的煩惱，同學如何鼓勵和幫助到你，你的感觸．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為作者的煩惱以及同學的鼓勵和幫助．第二部分為作者對此事的感觸．
 重點短語與句型：
for fear that 生怕…
be  in low spirits情緒低落
 encourage sb  to do sth鼓勵某人做某事
as long as只要
高分句型一：With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．此句用了with+賓語+賓語補足語
高分句型二：I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．此句用了no matter+疑問詞引導讓步狀語從句
高分句型三：It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself此句用了強調句型it was…who…
高分句型四：What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal此句結合了主語從句與賓語從句．

解答 With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．（高分句型一） I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．（高分句型二） Therefore，I was in low spirits．It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself．（高分句型三） Later on，I felt more relaxed without so much pressure．（作者的煩惱以及同學的鼓勵和幫助）
    What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal（高分句型四）．The most important thing is that one should always dream to be better．As long as I try my best and keep up the spirit of not giving up，everything is going well．（作者對此事的感觸）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧