Question

假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Mark 想了解你校的近況。正好你校正在開(kāi)展“提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)

浪費(fèi)”的活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文的提示給Mark寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。

★節(jié)約用紙，廢紙回收；

★節(jié)約用水，珍惜水源；

★節(jié)約用電，按時(shí)熄燈；

★節(jié)約用餐，不亂花錢(qián)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；?????????????????

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

????? 3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

4.參考詞匯：launch vt. 開(kāi)展； thrift n. 節(jié)儉。

 

Dear Mark,

I’m very glad you are so interested in our school. _________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,??

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mark,

I’m very glad you are so interested in our school.

Recently our school is launching an activity to call for thrift and go against wasting. Every student is required to save paper, water, electricity and food. All waste paper must be collected and sold to help the poor students. Water must be made full use of and now you cannot find any tap that is left running without students around. And each student should get into a great habit of turning off the light on time. What’s more, all of us are called on not to use our pocket money to buy some things unnecessary and some students even use their saved money to help the students in need.

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類(lèi)作文。假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Mark 想了解你校的近況。正好你校正在開(kāi)展“提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)浪費(fèi)”的活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文的提示給Mark寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。節(jié)約用紙，廢紙回收；節(jié)約用水，珍惜水源；節(jié)約用電，按時(shí)熄燈；節(jié)約用餐，不亂花錢(qián)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Water must be made full use of and now you cannot find any tap that is left running without students around.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：話題類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)