Question

2．假如你是李華．最近，你在網(wǎng)上看到了你的英國好友Mike給你發(fā)來的帖子，訴說自己在考試前總是感到很緊張，身心健康也受到了影響，為此很苦惱．請你給他回帖，提出一些建議．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．心態(tài)良好，睡眠充足；
2．均衡飲食，積極運動；
3．其它建議（至少兩條）．
注意：
1．字數(shù)：110左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．信的開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mike，
As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近，你在網(wǎng)上看到了你的英國好友Mike給你發(fā)來的帖子，訴說自己在考試前總是感到很緊張，身心健康也受到了影響，為此很苦惱．請你給他回帖，提出一些建議．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：心態(tài)良好，睡眠充足；均衡飲食，積極運動；其它建議（至少兩條）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As is well-known to all眾所周知；Therefore因此；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；keep a balanced diet保持平衡膳食；Last but not least最后同樣最重要的；have a great impact on對…有影響；
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）
Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）
I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
      Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes and stay healthy．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．