Question

3．最近，你校學(xué)生正在參加China Daily組織的一場(chǎng)討論．討論的主題是：Should the use of Internet Slang be forbidden in some places？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給該報(bào)寫一封信，介紹討論的結(jié)果，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)．

60% 認(rèn)為應(yīng)該禁止	40%認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該禁止
長(zhǎng)期濫用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言會(huì)使年輕一代不知道什么是真正的漢語(yǔ)．	社會(huì)總是在變化，語(yǔ)言也要與時(shí)俱進(jìn)，漢語(yǔ)應(yīng)當(dāng)吸收一些有用的新詞．
一些家長(zhǎng)或者不上網(wǎng)的人不能理解學(xué)生使用的網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言，影響溝通．	使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言聊天既快捷又方便．

要求：1．合理組織信息，不要逐句翻譯；
    2．作文詞數(shù)150詞左右．
Dear Editor，
                           
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）They think too much use of Internet Slang is a dangerous sign that the younger generation won't know what real Chinese is．
sign后接that是一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句，指sign的內(nèi)容；what real Chinese is是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，放在know后面．
（高分句型二）Besides，some students'writing is filled with Internet Slang，which makes it difficult to be understood by some parents and those who don't chat online．
句子里使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前面正個(gè)句子．在句子里make it adj to do sth使做某事成為你…
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)句型：Opinions are divided；Besides除此之外；is filled with 填滿，充滿；keep pace with 與…保持一致；As far as I am concerned就我所知．

解答 Dear Editor，
    I am writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether Internet Slang should be forbidden in some places．Opinions among students on this topic are divided．（概括段落）
（一部分人觀點(diǎn)）60% of the students think that Internet Slang should be forbidden．（陳述理由）They think too much use of Internet Slang is a dangerous sign （高分句型一）that the county's younger generation won't know what real Chinese is．（進(jìn)一步陳述理由）Besides，some students'writing is filled with Internet Slang，which makes it difficult to be understood by some parents and those who don't chat online．（高分句型二）
（其他人觀點(diǎn)）However，40% of the students think that it shouldn't be forbidden．In their opinion，society is always changing and language needs to keep pace with the times．Chinese should be able to absorb some useful new words．（過(guò)渡連接詞）In addition，using Internet Slang to chat is both quick and convenient．      
（我自己的看法）As far as I am concerned，we should be more careful with the use of language in official documents and textbooks．
                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                     Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．