Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Peter來信詢問你如何才能學好漢語。請你根據(jù)下列信息寫封回信。詞數(shù)100詞左右。回信應包括如下內(nèi)容：

1. 多看漢語電視劇，常讀漢語報紙和書刊；

2. 學唱漢語歌曲，多和中國人交流；

3. 常來中國，身臨其境，交中國朋友；

4. 留學到中國，必要時參加漢語學習培訓班。

注意：1. 不必逐字逐句翻譯； 2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

I’m delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese very well.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese very well.

As a good friend of yours, I’d like to give you a few suggestions. To begin with, you’d better watch Chinese TV series more often; it’s beneficial for you to read Chinese newspapers, books and magazines. Then, if possible, it is helpful for you to learn some Chinese songs and communicate with Chinese people. Meanwhile, you can often come to China to be personally on the scene so as to make more Chinese friends. In the end, why not come to China to study abroad? If so and necessary, you can also attend training courses in Chinese learning to improve your Chinese.

Would you love to write letters in Chinese?

Best wishes

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是要求寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、仔細研讀題目所給信息，不要誤解信息，也不要漏掉要點，明確自己是以哪個身份來寫這封信。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，符合書信口吻和語氣。詞匯短語豐富，如be beneficial for，communicate with。還用到了then、meanwhile和in the end，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，很有層次感。