Question

12．假如你是李華，高中第一學(xué)期已經(jīng)開始了，你的美國朋友Bob來信詢問你新學(xué)期的情況．請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給他寫一封回信：
1．學(xué)期初心情；    2．學(xué)校的生活；    3．認(rèn)識(shí)了許多新老師和新同學(xué)．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Bob．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹新學(xué)期的情況的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)（敘述學(xué)期初的情況）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（敘述現(xiàn)在的情況）．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)明書信目的；二學(xué)期初心情；三現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校的生活，認(rèn)識(shí)了許多新老師和新同學(xué)；四提出要求．
高分句型：
1．It took me quite a long time to get used to it，but now I have become one of the top students in my class．
句子里it takes sb to do sth 表示"做某事花費(fèi)某人多久"；get used to 表示"習(xí)慣于"．
我用了很長時(shí)間才適應(yīng)了這里，但是現(xiàn)在我已經(jīng)成為班上最好的學(xué)生之一．
2．I get along well with my classmates and I have made many friends，who are very talented and  kind．句子里get along well with 表示"與某人相處的好"；who一段定語從句，代指先行詞 many friends．
我和我的同學(xué)相處很好，我已經(jīng)交到很多好朋友，他們有才能并且和善．

解答 Dear Bob，
I'm very glad to hear from you and I'm willing to tell you something about my new school year．（點(diǎn)明書信目的）
At first，high school life was strange to me．（學(xué)期初心情）It took me quite a long time to get used to it，but now I have become one of the top students in my class．【高分句型一】I find I enjoy school very much．In fact，it's more fun than I expected．I'm interested in activities such as singing competitions，group dancing，sports  andmany others．I get along well with my classmates and I have made many friends，who are very talented and  kind．【高分句型二】I love my new life．（現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校的生活，認(rèn)識(shí)了許多新老師和新同學(xué)．）
I hope you can tell me something about your new school life．（提出要求）
Best wishes．
Yours，
LiHua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
審題是寫作的第一步，學(xué)生要審清作文所需要的時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，以及寫作要點(diǎn)．特別是寫作要點(diǎn)，一定不要遺漏，無論題目中的漢語還是英文要點(diǎn)都不能忽視，它們是老師看卷時(shí)的重點(diǎn)．