Question

19．假如你叫李華，是九年級一班的學生．五一節(jié)期間，學校組織了部分學生參加公益活動．你給你在美國的朋友Peter發(fā)了一份電子郵件，介紹了本次活動情況和參加活動的感受．

Project	What to do	Feeling
Visit old people's home	Do some housework Sing songs …	Happy Excited …

注意：1詞數(shù)80左右；電子郵件開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2結合以上要點，可圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3電子郵件中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱．
Dear Peter
How are you？I want to tell you what I did during May Day．                                                     ．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是給你在美國的朋友Peter發(fā)一份電子郵件，介紹五一公益活動情況和參加活動的感受．注意郵件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．活動；拜訪敬老院
2．活動內容；做家務，唱歌…
3．感受：開心，興奮…
常用到的重點短語：
want to do sth 想要做某事
do the laundry 洗衣服
take part in 參加
have a wonderful time 玩的開心
【高分句型】
1．We ①wanted to do something for the old people ②like my grandparents．
①want to do sth 想要做某事
②like像…一樣，介詞短語做后置定語，修飾先行詞old people．
2．Everyone felt very happy and excited though we were tired after working for a whole day．
though雖然，引導的讓步狀語從句．
3．I think①it is meaningful to②take part in such activities．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．it作為形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語，構成it is+adj+to do sth．
②take part in 參加

解答 Dear Peter，
How are you？I want to tell you what I did during May Day．
I think some of the students in my class did an interesting job during May Day．We worked as volunteers for the old people's home．（拜訪敬老院）We wanted to do something for the old people like my grandparents．【高分句型】We went there at about 8 o'clock．We did a lot of housework．Some students swept the floor．Some did the laundry for them．We also sang and danced with them．We had a wonderful time together．（活動內容；做家務，唱歌）
Everyone felt very happy and excited though we were tired after working for a whole day．【高分句型】I think it is meaningful to take part in such activities．【高分句型】I will not forget the experience．（感受）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
Li Hua．

點評 這題圖表類作文，所給材料較為詳細，邏輯清楚，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來．根據(jù)要點內容可知短語主要應用一般過去時態(tài)，句型以簡單句為主．寫作時要靈活運用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確．
本題因為要點已經(jīng)很明確，要注意使用正確的英語句型，避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達．寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤．只要平時積累足夠，就一定能寫出一篇滿意的作文．