Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

我校決定組織以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”為題的英語演講比賽。請你以Amy的名義寫一篇英語演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：

品質(zhì)	善良，照看無家可歸的貓和狗 大方，常捐款給當(dāng)?shù)卮壬茩C(jī)構(gòu)
事跡	組織慈善義演，為WWF籌款 分發(fā)傳單呼吁人們保護(hù)動(dòng)物
感悟	我們應(yīng)該和動(dòng)物交朋友 保護(hù)動(dòng)物很重要
打算	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

要求：

1.詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.所寫短文必須包括以上內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。

I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals

Hello everyone. I'm Amy. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I'm glad to make a speech here.

Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello everyone. I'm Amy. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I'm glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I like looking after homeless animals. I am generous and often donate my money to the local charities. I have ever organized a charity show to raise money for WWF. What’s more, I hand out leaflets to ask people to protect animals.

We should make friends with animals. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them.

If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如be a volunteer，be glad to do，make a speech，be kind to others，like doing，look after，raise money，make friends with，hand out，ask sb. to do，what's more，call on，try my best等。而I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves, so it is important for everyone to protect them./ If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)和特殊句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。