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Tom	Appearance（外貌）	又高又壯，戴眼鏡，總是面帶笑容
Nationality（國籍）	英國
Personalities（個(gè)性）	幽默，慷慨；樂于助人（請舉一例）
喜歡旅游，上個(gè)月去了北京，參觀了很多名勝。
Future plan	長大后想當(dāng)一名社會(huì)工作者。（說明原因）

 

要求：1. 須包含以上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

      2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I have a good friend named Tom.______________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I have a good friend named Tom. He comes from England. He is tall and strong. He wears glasses. He always wears a smile on his face.

Tom has a good sense of humour. He is generous and helpful. He often helps us with our homework..

Tom likes travelling. Last month, he went to Beijing with his family. He visited many places of interest there.

Tom wants to be a social worker when he grows up. Then he can listen to people’s problems and help them to solve their problems.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查說明文的寫作

點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第三人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。