Question

【題目】書面表達（10分）

假設你是李明，你結交了一個美國的筆友Andy。你要寫一封信給他，介紹你的一些基本信息，你的家庭和學校生活。根據(jù)以下信息提示：

李明	13歲；七年級學生；短發(fā)戴眼鏡；
家庭	和父母住在靖江；離學校遠；每天媽媽叫我起床；上學從不遲到；
愛好	1. 運動；學校乒乓球隊隊員；沒有很多時間練習； 2. 閱讀；讀書是有趣的事；從書中學到很多關于世界的事情；
學校生活	1. 喜歡所有的課；數(shù)學是最愛； 2. 三幢教學樓；現(xiàn)代的圖書館；一個月借書兩次；想帶你參觀我們學校。

要求：（1）要點完整，表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；

（2）80個詞左右。

Dear Andy,

Thank you for your letter. Now I’m writing to tell you something about myself.

I am _________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

I live _______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

I love ______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

I love _______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

All the best,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Andy,

Thank you for your letter. Now I’m writing to tell you something about myself.

My name is Li Ming. I’m 13 years old. I am in Grade Seven. I always wear glasses and have short hair.

I live in Jingjiang with my parents. My home is far away from the school. So every day my mother asks me to get up early. She tells me not to be late for school.

I love sports very much. Now I am one of the school table tennis team players. But I don’t have much time to practice.

I love reading, too. Reading books is interesting for me. I can learn a lot of things about the world from the book

I'm glad to introduce my school life to you. I like all the subjects. But math is my favourite .In my school, there is a modern library and three classroom buildings. We can borrow books from the library twice a month. I want to show you around our school.

All the best,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。還使用了一些固定句型及短語，為文章增色不少。如one of，learn from，show around等等。