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16．目前中學(xué)生早餐問(wèn)題引起社會(huì)關(guān)注，你所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)就"中學(xué)生早餐"問(wèn)題開(kāi)展問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，其結(jié)果令人擔(dān)憂．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐．

學(xué)生比例	早餐情況	健康狀況
55%	有規(guī)律地吃早餐	身體健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡
20%	沒(méi)有吃早餐	感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)，容易生病
你的建議：…

提示詞：regularly，active，junk food，a balanced diet，as a result，percent（百分比）
要求：
1．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所提供的信息，并發(fā)表自己的看法．
2．所給的提示詞可選擇使用，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右．文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Breakfast Is Important
Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its importance．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the studentshave breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health． 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．
It's necessary/important for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是匯報(bào)中學(xué)生早餐的調(diào)查結(jié)果，提倡營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.55% 有規(guī)律地吃早餐 身體健康，精力充沛
2.25% 吃垃圾食品 營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡
3.20% 沒(méi)有吃早餐 感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)，容易生病
4．你的建議：…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
as a result  作為結(jié)果
What's worse  更糟糕的是
keep healthy   保持健康
be bad for 對(duì)…不利

【高分句型】
1.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．
instead 代替，常放句末．
2．What's worse，they get ill easily．
What's worse  更糟糕的是
3．①I(mǎi)t's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast ②and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
②and連詞，連接兩個(gè)并列成分，這里是連接兩個(gè)句子．

解答 Breakfast Is Important
    Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active．（55% 有規(guī)律地吃早餐 身體健康，精力充沛 ）25 percent of them just have junk food instead．【高分句型】They don't have a balanced diet．It is bad for their health．（25% 吃垃圾食品 營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡） 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．【高分句型】（20% 沒(méi)有吃早餐 感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)，容易生病 ）
    It's necessary/important for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．（我的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂，本文寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容要根據(jù)吃早餐的情況，分析到具體比例和形成的原因．人稱(chēng)要以第三人稱(chēng)．由于是介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，也就是平時(shí)的情況，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．