Question

10．Write at least 60words about the topic"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"（以"我初中的最后一個(gè)寒假"為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
即將到來(lái)的寒假是你在初中階段最后一個(gè)寒假．你想怎樣度過(guò)這個(gè)寒假呢？你最想做的事情是什么呢？你覺(jué)得你父母會(huì)贊成你的想法嗎？請(qǐng)把你的想法寫(xiě)下來(lái)，告訴他們吧．
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）
It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"為題說(shuō)說(shuō)你對(duì)這最后一個(gè)暑假的想法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1你想怎樣度過(guò)這個(gè)寒假呢？
2你最想做的事情是什么呢？
3你覺(jué)得你父母會(huì)贊成你的想法嗎？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)
owing to 因?yàn)椤?br />feel like doing sth 想要做某事
 in favour of支持  同意
First and foremost首先
in addition此外
agree with贊同

【高分句型】
1．①Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing②that I ③prefer to do most．
①動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作為主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．
②定語(yǔ)從句，that是關(guān)系詞，作為從句的賓語(yǔ)．先行詞the thing．
③prefer to do更喜歡做某事．
2．①I(mǎi)n addition，②if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll ③agree with me of course．
①in addition此外，插入語(yǔ)．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
③agree with贊同，of course當(dāng)然．

解答 It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．（想怎樣度過(guò)這個(gè)寒假）Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．【高分句型】（最想做的事情是什么） I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．【高分句型】（你父母會(huì)贊成你的想法）That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．