Question

12．有些學(xué)生既不回家吃午飯也不樂意在學(xué)校飯?zhí)贸晕绮�，常到校外的餐廳去吃他們所喜歡的食品，甚至常吃校門外一些小攤上售賣的食物．有些食物是不衛(wèi)生、不健康的．請(qǐng)你就這一現(xiàn)象展開討論，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh．
要求：1.80個(gè)詞以上；2．條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確；
3．文中不得使用真實(shí)的校名及姓名．
參考詞匯：go…for lunch，canteen，stall，delicious，unhealthy，opinion．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
they prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat 他們寧愿走出學(xué)校去買他們喜歡吃的東西，they like to eat 是定語從句，修飾先行詞   something．  
高分句型二
 In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious在我看來，如果我們的學(xué)校希望更多的學(xué)生回來在學(xué)校吃午飯，他們應(yīng)該使食物更美味．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Some students don't like to go home for lunch，they dislike eating lunch at school．They prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat【高分句型一，注意定語從句的使用】．Some of them even eat the food from some stalls outside the school gates．But I'm afraid the food is not clean，it's unhealthy for students to eat outside．【要點(diǎn)一，學(xué)生到校外吃東西的情況】
       In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】，and  they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well．【要點(diǎn)二，自己的觀點(diǎn)及建議】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．