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【題目】社會(huì)不斷在發(fā)展進(jìn)步，成績(jī)好已經(jīng)不再是衡量一個(gè)好學(xué)生的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。某校正在開(kāi)展“走進(jìn)新時(shí)代，爭(zhēng)當(dāng)合格中學(xué)生”的大討論，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀阌X(jué)得除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，我們還應(yīng)該做些什么？提示如下：

平時(shí)	1.學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己, 高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)工作，謙虛，易于合作； 2.有好的閱讀習(xí)慣，提高自己； 3.注意保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂丟垃圾，步行或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)； 4.懂餐桌禮儀，舉止文明......(自由發(fā)揮1-2句)
空余時(shí)間	1.關(guān)注殘疾人，給他們向公眾展示技能的機(jī)會(huì)； 2.欣賞大自然的美，理解保護(hù)大自然的重要性。
總結(jié)	(1-2句)

要求：1.注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。

2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。

3.不要逐字翻譯，詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

First, we usually learn to look after ourselves. We should work to high standards and we are modest and easy to work with. Second, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Third,we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Fourth, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before you leave the table. We should queue, we must not push in before others.

Moreover,in our spare time,we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public.Also,we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature.

In a word,if we follow the advice,we will make a big difference to ourselves.\The more we act,the better we will improve.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勎矣X(jué)得除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，我們還應(yīng)該做些什么？結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I think……，F(xiàn)irst, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。