Question

9．網(wǎng)絡(luò)正逐漸走進我們的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地顯現(xiàn)了出來．請以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文．
提示：可以從read news，e-mail，chat，study，play games，see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones等方面加以評論．
要求：1．要有表明自己觀點的句子．
2．書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚，標(biāo)點符號使用正確．
3．短文中應(yīng)包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名．
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Internet is now coming into our life．It brings us not only a lot of convenience，happiness but also troubles．Some students use Internet as a tool to study．They look up the meanings of the words，a translated form of a sentence，the background of an event or a story，the information of a company or a famous person，etc．They also read news or send e-mails through it．Internet help them learn more and study well
On the other hand，some students play games，chat with friends，see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day．They are not interested in their subjects．It's very dangerous for them!
The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us．I think we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of it．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇寫作為議論文．寫作要點：1，網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的現(xiàn)狀描述，可以描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)如何影響了我們的生活；2，分析網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利弊；3．如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)．

解答 One possible version
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Internet is now coming into our life．It brings us not only a lot of convenience，happiness but also troubles．Some students use Internet as a tool to study．They look up the meanings of the words，a translated form of a sentence，the background of an event or a story，the information of a company or a famous person，etc．They also read news or send e-mails through it．Internet help them learn more and study well
On the other hand，some students play games，chat with friends，see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day．They are not interested in their subjects．It's very dangerous for them!
The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us．I think we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of it．

點評 考生需抓住寫作要點進行寫作，理清寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠?qū)ψ约旱目捶ㄕ归_分述，最好能用事實來進行例證．