Question

2．和諧，雨潤心田；文明，風(fēng)暖校園．請結(jié)合下面所提供的漫畫和提示詞，以"Doing Our Part"（從我做起）為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容必須
包括：1．簡單描述圖中人物行為，并簡述你的看法；
2．發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議．
提示詞：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with
要求：1．條理清楚，有表明自己觀點的句子；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)校名、人名、地名等真實信息．
3.80-l00詞．文章開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)．

Doing Our Part
From the picture，we can see that the boyFrom the picture，we can see that the boy is dropping litter outside of the trash bin．The ground looks dirty．I think what he does is wrong．
As middle school students，it is'our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful．We shouldn't talk loudly in public．Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school．Never waste food while eating in the dining room．Also we are supposed to get on well with the classmates．Being polite to teachers is also very important．
In a word，if everyone can do our part，we can make a difference to the world．．

Answer 1

分析 本題主題為：Doing Our Part．
寫作要點：1．簡單描述圖中人物行為，并簡述你的看法；
2．發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議．

解答 Doing Our Part
      From the picture，we can see that the boy is dropping litter outside of the trash bin．The ground looks dirty．I think what he does is wrong．
      As middle school students，it is'our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful．We shouldn't talk loudly in public．Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school．Never waste food while eating in the dining room．Also we are supposed to get on well with the classmates．Being polite to teachers is also very important．
     In a word，if everyone can do our part，we can make a difference to the world．

點評 考生需抓住寫作要點進行寫作，理清寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠?qū)ψ约旱目捶ㄕ归_分述，最好能用事實來進行例證．