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【題目】書面表達

學(xué)校將舉辦英語角活動，讓同學(xué)們互相交流學(xué)習(xí)英語的感受與方法。假如你是李明, 為了在這次活動中更好地分享你學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法，請你根據(jù)下列要求，為這次交流活動準備一份80詞左右的講稿，開頭已給出。

寫作要求：

1. 簡單自我介紹；

2. 談?wù)勛约簩W(xué)習(xí)英語的感受；

3. 給出學(xué)習(xí)英語的幾點建議；、

Hello, everyone._______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming, I'm from Class 2, Grade 8. My favorite subject is English because it's very useful and important for us. Now I will give you some advice about how to improve your English. You should watch some English films and listen to some English songs to learn new words and improve your pronunciation. It’s a good idea to speak English loudly to your classmates as much as possible. If you want to improve your reading skills, why not read some newspaper and books in English? How about writing some new words and expressions on the notebooks, and place them in your room. Try to remember them every day. You should practise listening, speaking, reading and writing as much as possible every day. And you will improve your English in these ways.

Thanks a lot.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。要求寫一篇有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的演講稿。根據(jù)提示要求，短文要從自我介紹、學(xué)習(xí)英語的感受、學(xué)習(xí)英語的建議三個方面進行寫作。重點是對英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議，要詳細介紹。英語學(xué)習(xí)是一個聽、說、讀、寫全面提高的過程，可以從這四個方面作一些建議。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，用第一人稱形式。

寫作亮點：本范文開頭用了一句話介紹自己，用了一句話講述自己的學(xué)習(xí)感受，其余的篇幅都用于介紹對英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議，層次清楚，中心明確，重點突出。其中用的should, why not, how about等等結(jié)構(gòu)，使提建議的方式多樣化，具體生動。文中大量用到的動詞短語，不定式短語，復(fù)合句，都為本文增色不少。