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2．有一種節(jié)約叫光盤，有一種公益叫光盤！所謂光盤，就是吃光你盤子中的食物．拒絕浪費(fèi)，珍惜糧食！針對(duì)這項(xiàng)行動(dòng)，并根據(jù)以下提示，請(qǐng)你以No Wasting On Food為題寫一篇短文，號(hào)召大家參與這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)．
注意：1短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3詞數(shù)：80左右．

Reasons	a waste of food，money，
	pollute the environment
	…
Suggestions	eat up all your food/clear your plate；
	leftovers（剩飯菜）…
	order less or smaller dishes
	…

No Wasting On Food
Recently，nearly 26restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活動(dòng)）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it is meaningful/necessary/importantfor us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste of food and money if we ordertoo much food．Meanwhile，the environment will be polluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．We should take actionto support the campaign．
First，we should eat up all the food in ourdishes and plates．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in therestraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．
Ina word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以No Wasting On Food為題寫一篇短文，號(hào)召大家參與光盤行動(dòng)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．原因；浪費(fèi)錢和食物，污染環(huán)境
2．建議；吃光食物，點(diǎn)少一點(diǎn)食物，打包剩菜
3．號(hào)召
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：

take part in 參加
a waste of 浪費(fèi)
take action to do sth 采取行動(dòng)做某事
eat up 吃光
【高分句型】
1．I believe①②it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
2．It is ①a waste of food and money ②if we order too much food．
①a waste of 浪費(fèi)
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
3．①In a word，I think ②③it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
①In a word總之
②think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
③it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語

解答 Recently，nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活動(dòng)） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．【高分句型】
It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food．【高分句型】Meanwhile，the environment will be polluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．（原因；浪費(fèi)錢和食物，污染環(huán)境，損害健康）We should take action to support the campaign．
First，we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．（建議；吃光食物，點(diǎn)少一點(diǎn)食物，打包剩菜）
In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．【高分句型】（號(hào)召）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)于此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個(gè)好處的句型．英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采．