Question

【題目】 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic" My dear mother, I want to tell…”(以“我親愛的媽媽，我想告訴你…”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)

提示:在日常生活中，媽媽給了我們無微無至的關(guān)懷，有時(shí)也有小小的煩惱。請對媽媽說出一句你最想說的話，并闡述理由，或結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勼w會

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

My dear mother, I want to tell you I love you

In my heart, my mother is my sun. Without my mother’s care, I couldn’t grow up well. I want to tell my mother I love you.

I remember when I was a child, the school held an English speech contest, I also took part in it. I thought my English is good, I can win the championship, but in the competition, I was so nervous that I made mistakes on the platform. As a result, I didn’t win the championship. I was so sad that I cried. After that, I lost interest in English, I didn’t want to learn English any more, and I didn't want to communicate with others in English. But my mother encouraged me. She made me face up to my mistakes and learn from my mistakes. She also taught me some ways to overcome my nervousness. With my mother’s encouragement, I finally won the championship in the later competition.

Without my mother, I wouldn’t have stood up again and won the championship. I love my mother because she is the best mom in the world. Thank you mum!

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。首先要把作文題目補(bǔ)充完整，然后以題目為主線，展開描寫�？梢酝ㄟ^描寫自己的親身經(jīng)歷，襯托出要對媽媽說的這句話，重點(diǎn)是要把事情描寫清楚。