Question

12．你的快樂源自健康的生活方式，你的成就來自良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣．他們在我們每個人的成長過程中起著很重要的作用．請根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖用英語寫一篇以"Success Comes from Good Habits"為題目，60 詞以上的短文．
注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何與考生本人有關(guān)的真實人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．

Success Comes from Good Habits
                                                                      

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①On the one hand，it is necessary for us our teenagers to have healthy living habits．一方面，對我們來說，有健康的生活習(xí)慣是很必要的．On the one hand一方面，it is necessary for sb to do sth對某某來說做某事是有必要的，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．
②In order to have a colorful life，we'd better develop good habits in our life and study．為了有一個豐富多彩的生活，我們最好在生活和學(xué)習(xí)中養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣．In order to 為了，引導(dǎo)一個目的狀語從句，had better do sth最好做某事，后面跟動詞原形，in our life and study在我們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中．

解答 Success Comes from Good Habits
Everyone wants to succeed．How to succeed？I think success comes from good habits．（引出話題）
On the one hand，it is necessary for us our teenagers to have healthy living habits（高分句型）．We had better eat more vegetables and less meat to keep fit．We should eat little junk food．Besides，we can do many after-class activities，such as playing basketball，joining a sports club（好的生活習(xí)慣）．On the other hand，it is important to have good learning habits．Reviewing before class，listening carefully in class and finishing our homework on time are all secrets to success．（好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣）
Good habits not only help us improve our grades，but also help us learn happily and learn well（好習(xí)慣帶來的益處）．In order to have a colorful life，we'd better develop good habits in our life and study（高分句型）（擁有健康的生活方式的感受）．

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