Question

【題目】回顧三年的初中生活，父母的教誨與支持始終伴你成長(zhǎng)，使你進(jìn)步。那些發(fā)生在你與父母之間的故事，看似平淡卻值得回味與珍藏。請(qǐng)以 “The Story of My Progress (進(jìn)步)” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇文章。

參考要點(diǎn)：1. 描述初中階段，你與父母之間的關(guān)系(親密，疏遠(yuǎn)…)

2. 講述一件發(fā)生在你與父母之間的事情(起因，經(jīng)過(guò)，結(jié)果…)；

3. 談?wù)勀愕母惺?/span>(感動(dòng)，懷念，影響……)。

要求：1. 故事必須原創(chuàng)；

2. 120詞左右；

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】My progress has connected with my mother．

Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．She encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．

Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress

【解析】

這篇文章屬于一篇記敘文，需要回顧一件與父母相處的往事，要寫(xiě)清楚整個(gè)事件的原委，包括起因經(jīng)過(guò)結(jié)果，通過(guò)這個(gè)故事來(lái)表達(dá)自己取得的一些進(jìn)步，父母帶給自己的影響以及自己內(nèi)心的感動(dòng)。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候需要注意正確使用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。舉個(gè)例子，可以講一下自己小時(shí)候不愿意在公共場(chǎng)合講話，學(xué)校將會(huì)有一場(chǎng)演講比賽，媽媽鼓勵(lì)我參加活動(dòng)，并且為我提供幫助，帶我去公園練習(xí)，最后獲得了獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，最后自己變得非常自信，表達(dá)對(duì)媽媽的鼓勵(lì)和陪伴的感謝。用到的短語(yǔ)及表達(dá)可以有：speak in public 在公共場(chǎng)合說(shuō)話，worried about 擔(dān)心，encouraged me to 鼓勵(lì)我去做…，take part in the activity 參加活動(dòng)，was shocked by 被…震驚，let her down讓她失望，encouragement and company 鼓勵(lì)和陪伴，made such great progress取得如此大的進(jìn)步。