Question

【題目】書面表達

假如Tom是你最好的朋友，請根據(jù)下面中文提示寫一篇60－80詞的英語短文介紹他。

1.他16歲，來自美國，學(xué)習(xí)努力，對人友好。

2.他習(xí)慣很好，從不熬夜，每天鍛煉。

3.他比大多數(shù)孩子更健康，更外向。我比他成績好。

4.上周六天氣晴朗，他和家人去了故宮，在那拍了許多照片，還吃了北京烤鴨，他覺得很美味，玩得很開心。

參考詞匯： 故宮 the Palace Museum； 北京烤鴨Beijing Roast Duck

要求：內(nèi)容正確，語句通順，字跡工整，60－80詞。

Answer 1

【答案】

My classmate Tom

Tom is my best friend .He is a 16-year-old boy .He is from America .He is hard-working and friendly to others .He also has many good habits .He never stays up late and exercises every day .So he is healthier and more outgoing than most kids .But I have better grades than he does .

Last Saturday ,he went to the Summer Palace with his family .They took quite a few photos there and ate Beijing Roast Duck,too . He thought it was delicious .They enjoyed themselves .

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如He also has many good habits .He never stays up late and exercises every day .So he is healthier and more outgoing than most kids .But I have better grades than he does .等等。