14.下面是《小艾,爸爸特別特別想你》這本書(shū)的兩幅插圖.圖中描繪了父親陪伴小艾成 長(zhǎng)的童年片段.父親快到了,請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷,以"爸爸,我想對(duì)你說(shuō)…"開(kāi)頭,寫(xiě)一 篇英語(yǔ)短文,以表達(dá)對(duì)父親的愛(ài)與感激之情.
要求:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名;
2.語(yǔ)句通順,結(jié)構(gòu)合理,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;
3.詞數(shù):80詞左右.短文開(kāi)頭部分己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).

Dad,I want to say to you.In the past few years,you have done a lot for me.We spent much happy time together.With your great care,I grow healthily and happily.I remember when I was ill,you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.I remember when I got good grades,you were always smiling…But now,you're getting older and older.So I want to say:Please have a good rest and relax.Thank you for your love.I love you forever..

分析 本題主要是一篇圖畫(huà)作文.是一篇表達(dá)對(duì)父親的愛(ài)與感激之情的作文.首先要弄清楚圖畫(huà)提供的信息,然后適當(dāng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力和創(chuàng)造力,來(lái)完成這篇文章.
1.人稱(chēng):題目可知,寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng).
2.時(shí)態(tài):回憶往事,一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主;現(xiàn)在想要說(shuō)的話(huà),以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主.
3.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):回憶往事(根據(jù)圖畫(huà)提示,看適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.);感恩父愛(ài).
4.主要短語(yǔ):
take care of 關(guān)心,愛(ài)護(hù);
take sb to+地點(diǎn),帶某人去某地;
get good grades 取得好成績(jī);
have a good rest 好好休息;
高分句型:
1.I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.我記得您經(jīng)常帶我到有趣的地方,給我買(mǎi)美味的食物.
這是一個(gè)含有賓語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句.
主句:I remember;賓語(yǔ)從句:you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.
2.You're getting older and older.
您越來(lái)年紀(jì)越大了.
同一詞的比較級(jí),用and連接,表示越來(lái)越…
例如:hotter and hotter 越來(lái)越熱.

解答 參考范文:
Dad,I want to say to you.(開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題)
   In the past few years,you have done a lot for me.We spent much happy time together.With your great care,I grow healthily and happily.I remember when I was ill,you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.【高分句型一】I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me.I remember when I got good grades,you were always smiling….(回憶往事)
【高分句型二】But now,you're getting older and older.So I want to say:Please have a good rest and relax.Thank you for your love.I love you forever.(感恩父愛(ài))

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題主要考查圖畫(huà)作文.寫(xiě)此類(lèi)題目的作文,首先審題:要讀懂畫(huà)面內(nèi)容和所表達(dá)的含義,抓住要點(diǎn),注意文體,以及寫(xiě)作的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài).然后讀圖列提綱:抓住文章的中心,根據(jù)圖畫(huà)信息,列出提綱.然后根據(jù)內(nèi)容,考慮所要選用的單詞,短語(yǔ),句型.最后再修改,潤(rùn)色全文.

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

4.The famous writer Shakespearecreated(創(chuàng)造)many moving characters during his lifetime.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:句型轉(zhuǎn)換

5.They get up early in the morning.(改為一般疑問(wèn)句)
Do theyget up early in the morning?

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

2.Eric looks quite cool in his black leather coat.(改為感嘆句)
HowcoolEric looks in his black leather coat!

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:選擇題

9.-Our classroom is so clean.
-It ___________ every day.( �。�
A.is cleanedB.was cleanedC.cleansD.cleaned

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:填空題

19.The boss in this factory made the wordkers work for 12 hours a day in the past.(改為被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))
The workers in this factoryweremadetowork for 12 hours a day in the past.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:選擇題

6.He was born in Germany,but he has made China his ______.( �。�
A.familyB.addressC.houseD.home

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:選擇題

3.    wonderful speech Emma gave at the UN conference!( �。�
A.HowB.WhatC.What aD.What an

查看答案和解析>>

科目:初中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源: 題型:選擇題

4.-I had a quarrel with my friend Jim yesterday,and now I_______it.
-Why not go and say sorry to him at once?It's never too late to mend.(  )
A.feel ashamed ofB.am proud of
C.am interested in   

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案
闂傚倸鍊烽懗鑸电仚婵°倗濮寸换姗€鐛箛娑欐櫢闁跨噦鎷� 闂傚倸鍊搁崐鎼佸磹閹间礁纾诲┑鐘叉搐缁狀垶鏌ㄩ悤鍌涘