Question

隨著我們長大，和家人圍坐在一起吃飯的時間越來越少。然而有研究表明，跟家人一起吃飯有助于身體健康。對此你有何看法？你又是如何做的？請以Eating with parents makes you healthier為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，陳述你的理由。

Eating with parents makes you healthier

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Eating with parents makes you healthier

????????????? I believe eating with parents will make teenagers healthier.

????????????? First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy. Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life. The dinner time is just a chance for communication.

????????????? Also, home-made meals are healthier for us to eat, for the food problem seems more and more serious now.

????????????? As for me, I have dinner with my parents every day. My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文提到一些起常用短語As for關(guān)于； make teenagers healthier 使人們更健康。First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy這句話中as引導非限制性定語從句，代指后面這件事。Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life.這句話中動名詞做主語，a way of doing做某事的一種方式。My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.這句話中體現(xiàn)形容詞最高級。

考點：話題作文。