Question

12．現(xiàn)在環(huán)境污染尤其是空氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重，近年來我國多地出現(xiàn)霧霾（smog）天氣，更引發(fā)了人們對環(huán)境污染的關(guān)注．請你圍繞環(huán)境保護(hù)這一主題，談?wù)劶亦l(xiāng)存在什么環(huán)境問題，作為中學(xué)生該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境．
要求：1 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
2詞數(shù)80-100．
It's important to protect the environment．
                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 高分句型分析：
高分句型一：
①As a student，we should do ②what we can③to protect the environment．作為一個學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該盡我們所能來保護(hù)環(huán)境．
①as介詞"作為"．
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作do的賓語；
③動詞不定式作目的狀語．
高分句型二：
We can①turn off the lights ②when it's ③bright enough in the room．當(dāng)房間里足夠明亮?xí)r，我們可以把燈關(guān)掉．
①turn off固定短語"關(guān)閉"
②when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
③enough修飾形容詞或副詞時，應(yīng)置于形容詞或副詞的后面，此處指"足夠明亮"．

解答 It's important to protect the environment．
   Now pollution is getting worse and worse，especially air pollution．So more and more people start to realize the importance of environment．
   In my hometown，Qiqihar，the air is not very fresh and we often feel uncomfortable．It's unpleasant for us to work and study．It's our duty to protect the environment．【家鄉(xiāng)存在的環(huán)境問題】
   As a student，we should do what we can to protect the environment．【高分句型一】We can drive less and take the bus to school or walk to school．We can reuse the paper and try not to throw the rubbish away．We can turn off the lights when it's bright enough in the room．【高分句型二】
   In a word，we should try our best to protect the environment．We can have a beautiful world【作為中學(xué)生該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境】

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時，要先確定好時態(tài)，再注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．