Question

17．Write at least 60words on the topic"I'd like to make…feel happy"以《我想使…高興》為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格．
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Suggested phrases and expressions（詞組）：not afford to buy…； spend…doing something with somebody；bake something for somebody； make one's own present（s）； become healthier
I'd like to makemy mother feel happy．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Mother love is ①so great and selfless that I can never do too much ②to make my mother feel happy ③in return．母親的愛是如此的偉大和無私，我不能做太多，讓我的母親感到快樂以此來回報她．
①so+形容詞或副詞+that…如此…以至于…后引導結(jié)果狀語從句．
②動詞不定式作目的狀語
③in return回報
高分句型二：
①After finishing my homework，I have ②spent most of my time③practicing baking with my father these days．在完成我的家庭作業(yè)之后，這些天我練習烤制蛋糕和爸爸一起度過了大部分的時間．
①after在…之后，作時間狀語
②spend time（in） doing sth花費時間做某事
③practice doing sth練習做某事

解答 I'd like to make my mother feel happy
Mother love is so great and selfless that I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return【高分句型一】【點題，引出下文】
With the approach of Mother's Day，I want to extend my gratitude to my dear mom．Since as a student，I can't afford to buy something expensive，such as perfume，clothes，I have decided to make my own present．Hard as I tried，it's never easy to bake a perfect cake for the first time．After finishing my homework，I have spent most of my time practicing baking with my father these days．【高分句型二】I just can't wait to share the gift for her and see the big smile on her face．【怎樣使媽媽高興】

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