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2．假設(shè)你和朋友將在今年暑假，組隊(duì)參加以"擁抱大自然"為主題的戶(hù)外拓展夏令營(yíng)，其中包括小組自由活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你為你們小組設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)活動(dòng)方案．
提示詞語(yǔ)：climb mountains，go fishing，pick fruits，have a campfire（篝火晚會(huì)）
要求：1．寫(xiě)明你們組計(jì)劃要做的具體活動(dòng)并給出理由；
2．提示詞語(yǔ)僅供參考，可增減內(nèi)容；
3．詞數(shù)80～100．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名與地名．
We are going for a camp this summer．I'm glad to make a plan for our group．（計(jì)劃的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及原因）First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise．After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better．What's more，there will be a campfire．We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories．Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？
（期待參與）We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together．．

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分析 這是一篇提綱作文，所給材料限制性小，本文寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)是：1，計(jì)劃的活動(dòng)是什么，2寫(xiě)出安排這些活動(dòng)的理由，此文是計(jì)劃打算，用將來(lái)時(shí)，用第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用，比如：after that，what's more，so that，I believe…等

解答 We are going for a camp this summer．I'm glad to make a plan for our group．
（計(jì)劃的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及原因）First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise．After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better．What's more，there will be a campfire．We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories．Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？
（期待參與）We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 第一步仔細(xì)閱讀提示，思考所給信息，假話(huà)文章大致內(nèi)容，第二步根據(jù)信息要求遣詞造句，造句成文，第三步，通讀全文，糾正錯(cuò)誤．