Question

9．假如你是張鵬，轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)去了杭州．你的好友王新來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，并告訴你他暑假要來(lái)看你．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)一下提示，給王新寫(xiě)一封回信．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．表達(dá)你收到他來(lái)信之后的激動(dòng)心情．
2．介紹新學(xué)校．
（1）設(shè)施：一個(gè)大操場(chǎng)，一個(gè)圖書(shū)館．
（2）師生：友善，易于相處
3．針對(duì)他獨(dú)自乘飛機(jī)來(lái)杭州提出具體建議
寫(xiě)作要求：
1．不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名．
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫．
3．字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精煉，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，調(diào)理清晰．
4．至少80詞．
Dear Wang Xin，
How are you doing？       ．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Peng．

Answer 1

分析 此作文要求寫(xiě)一封信文．動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇作文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，題中包含了這些要點(diǎn)：①表達(dá)你受到他來(lái)信之后的激動(dòng)心情；②介紹新學(xué)校；③針對(duì)他獨(dú)自乘飛機(jī)來(lái)杭州提出具體建議．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．
高分句型：
1．I have been in this school  since I came here last year．自從去年我到這以來(lái)一直在這所學(xué)校．這是一個(gè)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的句子，since后引導(dǎo)的句子要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
2．If you come here，you can take a plane．如果你到這來(lái)，你可以乘飛機(jī)．這是一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can的句子，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
3．when you have some problems，you can ask the air hostess for help，如果你有問(wèn)題，你可以向空姐尋求幫助．這是一個(gè)when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can的句子，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來(lái)時(shí)．

解答 Dear Wang Xin，
How are you doing？Thank you for your letter，I am very glad to know you will come to see me in the coming summer holiday．【要點(diǎn)一】
Now I tell you something about my new school．I have been in this school  since I came here last year【高分句型一】，my new school is big and beautiful，there is a big playground and a library in it，I like playing football and reading books，you know，I often play football on the playground with my classmates after class．The teachers and students are very friendly，they often help me and now I am getting on well with them．【要點(diǎn)二】If you come here，you can take a plane【高分句型二】，it is safe and fast，when you have some problems，you can ask the air hostess for help【高分句型三】． I am looking forward to seeing you soon．【要點(diǎn)三】
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Peng．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類(lèi)題材，將詞匯歸類(lèi)整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．