Question

20．中共十八屆五中全會(huì)提出一對(duì)夫婦可生育兩個(gè)孩子政策后，全社會(huì)展開(kāi)了熱烈的討論，某校也就"是否想要個(gè)弟弟或妹妹"對(duì)部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告，并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)，問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如圖所示：

注意：1．全文字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右；
2．條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)使用正確；
3．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)．
Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or asister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是某校就"是否想要個(gè)弟弟或妹妹"對(duì)部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行的一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告，并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．調(diào)查結(jié)果；40%支持：不再孤獨(dú)，彼此幫助，分享喜憂．60%反對(duì)：擔(dān)心父母的愛(ài)，打擾學(xué)習(xí)…
2．你的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
get used to 習(xí)慣于
what's more 再者
after all 畢竟
as…as 一樣…
【高分句型】
1．Besides，they're afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②so…that如此…以致于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
2．In my opinion，①it's hard to say ②whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．
①it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
②say后面是whether 引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
3．①After all，they're the persons ②who will make the final decision．
①after all 畢竟，做插入語(yǔ)．
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞presons，who作為從句的主語(yǔ)．

解答 Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．
About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．（40%支持：不再孤獨(dú)，彼此幫助，分享喜憂）
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．【高分句型】（60%反對(duì)：擔(dān)心父母的愛(ài)，打擾學(xué)習(xí)…）
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．【高分句型】But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．【高分句型】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．