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1．假如上周一你班舉行了"節(jié)約水、愛護(hù)水"的主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道．
1．邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告，他為我們講解了我國(guó)的水資源情況；
2．了解到我國(guó)一些地方水污染嚴(yán)重；我市雖有一些河流，但也缺水；
3．全班同學(xué)討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水，想出了許多辦法（請(qǐng)舉例）；
4．向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議．
要求：1．短文要包括以上所有要點(diǎn)；
2．行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)：80-100個(gè)．開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：水資源water resourses  嚴(yán)重地seriously  缺少be short of
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water．Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk．He talked about the water recourses in our country．After his speech，we know that some of the rivers are polluted seriously in our country．Although there are some rivers and lakes in our city，we are still short of water．We had a discussion about how to save and protect water．As a result，we think out many ways．For example，we shouldn't leave water running after using it．
Dear friends，we must stop wasting water from now on．Or there will be no more water in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是"節(jié)約水、愛護(hù)水"的主題活動(dòng)的報(bào)道．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告，他為我們講解了我國(guó)的水資源情況；
2．了解到我國(guó)一些地方水污染嚴(yán)重；我市雖有一些河流，但也缺水；
3．全班同學(xué)討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水，想出了許多辦法（請(qǐng)舉例）；
4．向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議．

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
talk about談?wù)?br />be short of 缺乏
as a result結(jié)果
think out 想出
stop doing sth 阻止做某事
【高分句型】
1．Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk．
一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，為了突出主語(yǔ)Mr．Wang．
2．①Although②there are some rivers and lakes in our city，we are still ③short of water．
①although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．
②there be表示有．
③be short of 缺乏．

解答 Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water．Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk．【高分句型】He talked about the water recourses in our country．（邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告，他為我們講解了我國(guó)的水資源情況）After his speech，we know that some of the rivers are polluted seriously in our country．Although there are some rivers and lakes in our city，we are still short of water．【高分句型】（了解到我國(guó)一些地方水污染嚴(yán)重；我市雖有一些河流，但也缺水）We had a discussion about how to save and protect water．As a result，we think out many ways．For example，we shouldn't leave water running after using it（全班同學(xué)討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水，想出了許多辦法）．
Dear friends，we must stop wasting water from now on．Or there will be no more water in the future．（向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．