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8．在一節(jié)寫作課上，老師要求你們寫一篇名為"心目中的同學(xué)"的短文，現(xiàn)在請你用英文來介紹一下你的同學(xué)Mike．
1）Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點子；
2）他小時候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書籍，愛迪生的故事對他影響最大；
3）他對搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎；
4）現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛好，他說這真是其樂無窮；
5）他的夢想…我認為…
注意事項：
1）短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
2）第5要點的內(nèi)容必須用2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)90個左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
有創(chuàng)意的  creative    愛迪生  Edison
My classmate Mike is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是介紹一下你的同學(xué)Mike．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1）Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點子；
2）他小時候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書籍，愛迪生的故事對他影響最大；
3）他對搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎；
4）現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛好，他說這真是其樂無窮；
5）他的夢想…我認為…
常用到的重點短語：
come up with 想出…
be crazy about 對…著迷
give up 放棄
be known for 因…而著名
【高分句型】
1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison．
①動詞不定式做表語，和be動詞is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②as…as與…一樣．
2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day
①后接省略了that的賓語從句．
②be known for 因…而著名

解答 My classmate Michael is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．（Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小時候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書籍，愛迪生的故事對他影響最大）He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他對搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛好，他說這真是其樂無窮）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的夢想是成為像愛迪生一樣的發(fā)明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．【高分句型】（我認為他會實現(xiàn)夢想）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習(xí)慣